最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老师”这一话题展开讨论，有些人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。观点原因同意不完全同意1教会

最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老师”这一话题展开讨论，有些人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。
观点
原因
同意
不完全同意
1
教会如何生活
过分溺爱
2
指出缺点，指明方向
强加兴趣、价值观
3
教会富有爱心
希望值过高
要求：1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯。
2、词数：120词左右。3、开头已给出，不计人单词总数。
Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers . Some students Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers . Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life . What’s more, parents’ love helps to teach them how to love others, So parents are their most important teachers .

(答案→)Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers . Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life . What’s more, parents’ love helps to teach them how to love others, So parents are their most important teachers . 解析：本文属于考生比较熟悉的正反观点类议论文，也就是关于一个话题的两种不同的态度，支持的或者反对的。本文的要点都已经给出来了，考生需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点都连接起来，使之成为一个整体。如for one hand, for anther, what’s more等，这些连接词可以让文章更为流畅。也要使用一些高级的句型如定语从句，倒装句等让文章富有变化，不要那么死板。在选词的时候，要选择4,5个高级的词汇或者短语，可以提升文章的层次。

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