我心中的幸福英语作文能不能从正反两面去说明，最后表达自己观点？

我心中的幸福英语作文能不能从正反两面去说明，最后表达自己观点？

The meaning of a happy life may reveal in many aspects,for me,it is something that I can pursuit,something that around me,companies me through my life.
As a student,my happiness is the ease of school life.I like to play with my friend,to study with my classmates,and be in harmony with them.Outside the class,I often play basketball,doing other sports as well.It always brings me happiness when singing with the classmates during spare time,however,the heavy burden of the study often takes up my time in caring my lovely pets.
For the happiness in my dream,a great job would be of significant importance.I hope that I can have a house with a garden,where I can relax my tension.When I come back from work,I can see my achievement,knowing that I am living for something,pursuing my dream,and sharing my success with my parents,and I believe,that these are the real happiness.In order to achieve the dream,I will definitely devote myself to study without hesitation,I will wait,and keep work till the day come true.
Wrapping up my thoughts,it is in my belief,that the real happiness lies in our mind,lies around us.And,it is a good thing that we have a hope,a better tomorrow.

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