英语翻译Dear Sir or Madam,This is the applicant XXX from China w

英语翻译
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is the applicant XXX from China who is applying the the MSc Artificial Intelligence 1 Year course for 2009/2010.My application was made in Nov 2008; unfortunately,I have not got any information on my application status.The University of Edinburgh is always my FIRST choice and I have been waiting for it about FOUR months since Nov 2008.As for me,I do need to make my decision until University of Edinburgh response to me although I have been offered places in other universities.I am confident to be a qualified candidate in terms of both academic potential and the research ability.I hope to hear from you early!Because I need to apply visa in China and there are a lot of applicants to apply the visa which needs to make an appointment before!Thanks for your consideration!
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句子要通顺!

敬爱的先生或女士,
我来自中国,应聘人工智能2009-2010一年课程.这份申请表制于2008年11月,不幸的是,至今我未收到任何关于我的申请的消息.我的第一志愿是爱丁堡大学,从2008年11月至今我已经等了4个月,但尚未收到任何爱丁堡大学的回复.尽管别的学校已经给我提供了相关位置,在爱丁堡大学给我回复之前我必须做出决定.我相信自己具备优秀的学术学习潜力和研究能力.我希望能早些收到你的回信.因为我申请签证需要许多申请表需提交,这些申请表需要预约.谢谢你的关注