Dear Tom How are you getting on? I don't think this a good idea to travel a lot and visit as ma

Dear Tom How are you getting on? I don't think this a good idea to travel a lot and visit as many places possible. Last July Bell pay a visit to Europe.Europe is very beautiful, but his holiday wasn't very nicely. He visited several ceountry, and was in each of the countries for only three days. He visited a great many of places of interest, and was always in a hurry. While he returned from Europe,he was very tiring.

亲爱的Tom,你适应的还好吗？我不认为旅行太多和去尽你所能去的那么多地方是个好主意，(少了个is)。去年七月，Bell去了欧洲。欧洲非常美，但他的假期过得不愉快。他去了几个国家（country）,每个国家只停留了三天。他游览了很多名胜古迹，但都很匆忙。当他从欧洲回来时特别疲惫。

亲爱的汤姆你最近好吗？我不认为一连去很多地方旅游或是尽可能的去最多的探访是一个好主意，去。去年7月，贝尔有机会去欧洲旅游。欧洲非常漂亮，但他的假期是不是很完美。他访问了几个城市（countries），并在每个国家是只待了三天。他参观了许多伟大的地方，但行程总是很匆忙。虽然他从欧洲回来，但他很疲倦