英语的一篇书面表达【My terrble school tirp]

上周六，我们学校组织了一次外出旅行。走到半路时，汽车坏了。爬山时，天突然下起了大雨，由于大家都没带伞，所以全都淋湿了。我们很晚才到家，又累又饿。

Last week,we had a school trip.But the school trip was too terrble.we planted to take the school bus to go to the mountain.But the shool bus was broken.So we had to walk to there.And the weather was rain.We did not bring unmbrealls and raincoats.So we all got wet.That really too bad!In the evening we got home very late.Today I was tired and hungry.What a bad school trip!