短文改错 （共10处错误，每改对1处1分，共10分）Once there was boy. His mother was very fat but talked too much

短文改错 （共10处错误，每改对1处1分，共10分）
Once there was boy. His mother was very fat but talked too much to him. He didn’t want his teachers and classmate to see her. Every time the parents’ meeting was held, he would ask a beautiful lady to attend it instead her. In return, she paid her 50 yuan each time. One day, he was serious ill and lost consciousness. So he sent to hospital by his teacher. Three days late he came back to life and got to know his mother had been looking after him all the time. He was so thankful that he cried and had told his mother how sorry he was for that he had done.boy 前加a

(答案→)boy 前加a 解析：【小题1】boy 是可数名词，前加a，句意：从前有个男孩【小题2】他妈妈很胖和他说话太多，是并列关系，不是转折关系：but改为and; 【小题3】考查名词：teachers是复数，classmate也应该改为 classmates【小题4】instead是副词，要是接宾语 后加 of【小题5】根据句意应该是男孩每次付给他50块钱，she 改为 he【小题6】修饰形容词ill应该是副词seriously【小题7】句意：他被老师送到医院，用过去时的被动：sent 前加 was【小题8】表示“几天后”用a few days later【小题9】和cried并列用过去时told 【小题10】for后面的宾语从句，从句中缺少宾语： that 改为 what

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