中文翻译成英语,水平不高，有哪些错

中文翻译成英语,水平不高，有哪些错

79.If you study hard and you can pass the(改成the) exam
80.They have many commons as friends many years(可改可不改，你的也不错，但是你的句子里common应该加s，因为在这里共同点不是仅有一个)
81.Can you implement the plan quickly(你的carry out用在这里不合适，“快”在这里是副词，要加ly)
82.You can writing by English easier if you look more books(改成这样的陈述方法可能会更符合英语的表达方式，你的句子也可以)
83.People may increased the probability of heart disease when they often get angry(改成这样的陈述方法可能会更符合英语的表达方式，你的句子也可以)
86.Is that healthy by drink water what had boiling(改成这样的陈述方法可能会更符合英语的表达方式,你的句子有语法错误)
88.We never found so serious food problems at last(这个句子不能用see，在英语中see往往只是单纯的表达“看到”，不能表达“见过”，这里用found，有“发现”的意思)
93.Martin is better than his colleague by the point of exprience(我的句子直译过来就是说：马丁比他的同事强在经验方面)

自己翻的，绝对原创
79.If you study hard, you will pass the exam.
80.They have known each other for many years. And what's more, they have a lot in common.
81.Can you put this plan into practice as soon as possible?
82.The more you read, the easier writings will be.
83.People who tend to get angry are more likely to develop heart attack.
86.Is drink more water every day good for your health?
88.We never saw such a serious problem of food in the past.
93.Martin is superior than his colleague in the aspect of experience.

79 You will pass the exam if you work hard.
80 They have been good friends for years and hanve much in common.
81 Can you carry out this plan as soon as possible?
82 The more book you read, the easier the English writing is.
83 The risks of heart disease will inrease for those who are easy to get angry.
86 Will it be good for health when driking plenty of water every day?
88 We've never seen such a serious food problem in the past?
93 Martin is superior than his colleague as to expereince.

If you study hard and you would pass this exam
They have been good friends for many years and they have much in common
could you carry out this plan as soon as possible?
the more books you read,easier to write you would feel
Never do we see such heavy food problem in the past

79.If you study hard, you will pass this exam
80.They are good friends for many years and they have many in common
81. can you carry out this plan as soon as possible?
82. The more you read, the more you feel easy when you write English.
83.People who get angry easily will increase the risk of heart attack.
86.Is drinking water everyday good for health?
88.In the past, we have never seen such serious food problems.
93.In experience aspect,Martin is better than his colleague.

79 If you study hard, you will pass the exam.
80 They are friends for many years and have a lot of common points.
81 Can you carry out the plan as quickly as possible?
82 The more books you read, the easier you write in English.
83 Heart disease is a pad in the straw for petulant people.
86 Is it healthy to drink water everyday?
88 We have never seen so serious food problems ever since.
93 Martin is much more experienced than his colleagues.

79没问题
80.They are good friends for many years and share many similarities.
81.应该用副词quickly
82.看书：read books ; easier比较级；write 可以直接用原形
83.People easy to be angry adds a risk to suffer from heart attack.
86.Is it good for health to drink water every day?
88.We've never seen such serious food problems before.
93.用on 比较好，但是最好这样翻：Martin has more experience than his colleages.
楼主基本功不扎实，在词性，句型及时态方面有待加强啊~~~