(初三)谁来帮我看一下我的英语作文有没有语法错误，顺便帮这着一改

    Xu Zheng won a prize for his essay about the importance of English. This week we interviewed him. The Following are the viewpoints of his essay. He thinks that most peple speak English as a second language,and English is used around the world for the computers. Most of software is in English. English is used in science. English can help us understand many new books and movies. In a word,English is very important in our life.

    We find Xu Zheng's English is very good。So  we asked some ways to learn English。 He said he learnt by making up conversations and speaking to friends in English because he thinks he can't get the pronuciation right，and native speakers talking too quickly。 The ways he likes  are taking notes，watching movies and listening to pop songs。So，how about you？Can you find a way to improve your English？

第二行第一个单词第一个字母小写；第二行“as a”应该改为“as the”；第三行“Most of software is in English”应改为“Most of the softwares are in English”；第二段“So  we asked some ways ”应改为“So  we asked him some ways ”；“ He said he learnt ”后加上it ；“speaking to friends ”应改为“talking  with  friends”；“ He said he learnt by making up conversations and speaking to friends in English because he thinks he can't get the pronuciation right，and native speakers talking too quickly。” 此句前后时态不统一。“watching movies ”应改为seeing movies ；“ listening to pop songs”应该没有to ；小孩子，希望能帮到你！