请帮忙改下这段英文的语法错误.
Since you gave me some secret photos last night,I have been waiting for some more exciting photos.Could you hurry up?I can not wait!
请帮忙改下这段英文的语法错误.
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解决时间 2021-07-20 14:34
- 提问者网友：别再叽里呱啦
- 2021-07-20 08:11
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- 五星知识达人网友：怙棘
- 2021-07-20 09:37
我稍微改了下请参考
这短话没有大的语法错误只是在细节上几个地方稍有不妥
1）出现了两个photos,本着避免用词重复的原则,第二个photot用代词ones代替.
2）通常说hurry it up
Since you gave me some secret photos last night,I have been waiting for some more exciting ones.Could you hurry it up?I can not wait!
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