Imagine you are on vacation,Talk about what did you do on vacation. I love travelling very

Imagine you are on vacation,Talk about what did you do on vacation.







I love travelling very much. On the summer vacation , I usually go outdoors and have fun.This summer vacation I want to do something different . I am interested in Chinese history. So I flew to Beijing and Xi’an for the summer vacation. During theday,I visited places of interest and went shopping. At night, I took walks to enjoy the night views. I am enjoying my holiday and having a great time.

(答案→)I love travelling very much. On the summer vacation , I usually go outdoors and have fun.This summer vacation I want to do something different . I am interested in Chinese history. So I flew to Beijing and Xi’an for the summer vacation. During theday,I visited places of interest and went shopping. At night, I took walks to enjoy the night views. I am enjoying my holiday and having a great time. 解析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者先写他的爱好是什么，之后写通常假期做什么，最后写他此次假期做了什么。 本文主要用一般过去时和一般现在时进行叙述。【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 go outdoors ，have fun ， do something different， interested in， places of interest ， went shopping ，took walks等短语，以及 用During theday,I visited places of interest and went shopping. At night, I took walks to enjoy the night views.两句进行对比。文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

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