初中英语改错下面这段话一共10个错误,知道的告诉我,要有一定的把握!Sports help people to live

初中英语改错
下面这段话一共10个错误,知道的告诉我,要有一定的把握!
Sports help people to live happy.They help to keep people heal－－thy or happy. When they are playing game ,people move a lot. This is good to their health .Do sports with their friends makes them happy. many people enjoy sports with watching other play .In
small towns, groups of people meet watching bicycle races or other games. In big cities , thousand of people buy tickets to seeing a football match or a basketball game.
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Sports help people to live happliy 副词修饰动词
They help to keep people healthy and happy
When they are playing games
this is good for their health.固定搭配
in big cities,thousands of people...表示几千人
buy tickets to see a football match or a basketball game.表目的
many people enjoy sports by watching other play 通过．．
上句的other-others 不确定的别人
groups of people meet to watching bicycle races or other games 表目的
上句的watching-watch
翻译：
运动使人们生活快乐．运动有助于人们的健康和心情愉快．当人们运动时,会有较多移动．这对身体大有好处．和朋友一起做运动更使人们快乐．许多人通过看他人运动享受运动．在小城镇里,许多人聚在一起看自行车比赛或其他比赛．在大城市里,成千上万的人买票去看一场足球或篮球比赛．