翻译一篇英文短文有没有错误语法

A smile is as important as the sun, because it can make people happy, has a good day. If you are not happy, then you have to smile. A smile will make you have more friends, so we have to learn to smile, because smiles like a flower, it brings happiness. Let us continue to practice smiling, so that life is full of sunshine.

Smile is as important as the sun, because it can make people happy, enjoy themselves. If you are not happy, then you have to smile. A smile will make you have more friends, so we have to learn to smile, because smiles like flowers, they bring happiness. Let us continue to practice smiling, so that life is full of sunshine.

没什么打错，改了一些

第一个句子中， has改为have：(make people)have a good day.

第三个句子有点长，有很多问题。应该说，断句处理的不好。简单提一下，一个句子有so，就不需要because。

第四个句子有点怪怪的，两个分句中的主语不统一。

总体来说，中式英语味道太浓。不过，写多点，多注意点，就能进步。要加油哦！

句子中逗号太多,英文不是中文,不能直翻.中国人能明白,外国人就不成了.英文里叫run-on

能不能把中文给我看看,我来给你翻译一下