短文改错 共十处错误 求质量 My mother is a person who always pu

短文改错 共十处错误 求质量 My mother is a person who always pu

更正在括号处标明,保证准确率!My mother is a person who always puts the needs of others ahead (加入of) hers.It is of importance (to改成for) her that those around her (feels改成feel) happy and comfortable.Anyone who visits her will be (offering改成offered) much delicious food.My mom loves to see people enjoy her (wonderfully改成wonderful) cooking,and often gives food to the homeless.She can always find time to (borrow改成lend/give) a hand to those who are in need.She has raised (去掉up) four children.She has been (the改成an) amazing mother.She does (hers改成her) best to make us feel that we're the most important people (with改成in) her world.======以下答案可供参考======供参考答案1:My mother is a person who always puts the needs of others ahead 【of】hers. It is of importance 【for】 her that those around 【make】her 【feel】happy and comfortable. Anyone who visits her will be 【supplied with】 much delicious food. My mom loves to see people enjoy her 【wonderful】 cooking, and often gives food to the homeless. She can always find time to 【give】 a hand to those who are in need. She has 【raised 】 four children. She has been 【an】 amazing mother. She does 【her】 best to make us feel that we're the most important people 【in】 her world.

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