i made a wish for my families,my friends and myself,hope tha

i made a wish for my families,my friends and myself,hope that will be come true
请帮忙看下这句话的语法是否正确,

不正确的.如果在口语能听懂就行,书面上的话就绝对不可以的.wish 和 hope是两个动词,可以选择用其中一个非谓语作伴随状语.我不太了解你想要表达的意思,没法帮你改.
再问： 我就想说，我为家人，朋友和自己许了个愿，期望这个愿望成真
再答： i made wishes for my family,my friends and myself and hoped tha（关系词）they can come true.或者是i made wishes for my family,my friends and myself，hoping that（ 这是一个代词）can come true.或者是Wish the wishes that wished for my family,my friends and myself will come true.