谁能帮助我，急

但是我真心感谢您让我改掉了不少缺点,我总是在早上六点起床，我每天六点十五之前洗漱完毕，我大约在六点十七吃早饭，在六点三十我从家出发去学校，我们在七点上课，我上午有五节课，第一节语文，第二节语文，第三节英语，第四节体育，第五节生物。我最喜欢的学科是体育，我也比较喜欢数学课。因为它们都很有趣。我下午也有五节课，我每天都在下午六点放学。我大约在六点四十吃完饭，我每天都在九点之前把作业写完，在这之后，我会做一些卷子一直学到十点三十或是十一点，在那时我会感到又累又困但我认为这很值得，我在十一点时上床睡觉，这就是我的一天

But I really thank you let me change a lot of shortcomings, I always gets up at six in the morning, I finished washing gargle before every 6:15, I eat breakfast at 6:17 about at 6:30, I go home from school, we at 7 o 'clock in the morning, I class five class, first quarter, in the second quarter, the Chinese language in the third quarter, the fourth quarter, the 5th sports. My favorite subject is sports and I also like math. Because they are very interesting. I have five classes in the afternoon, I everyday at 6 PM. I was about forty dinner at six o 'clock every day, my homework before nine written, after that, I'll do some papers have learned ten or eleven thirty, then I'll feel tired and sleepy but I think it's worth, I went to bed at 11:00, this is my day

怎样帮？？、、