英语作文（关于自己的爱好）

我们要写关英语作文，我想穿插下面的片段：［帮我修改下~（不限字数）］

My favorite stars are Super Junior.I think they are so smart and lovely. I like action movie《Ye wen》and comedy《Shi Quan Jiu Mei》.

一小段而已，有什么错误吗？

比如，嗯`` “My favorite stars are Super Junior”中的“are”是否要用“is”？

Super Junior 是一个团体，但前后要一致，如果前面用"is"，那我后面的“they are"怎么办？

（先帮我解决这个问题，再给我说哪里不对，要改~)

谢谢啦~~

我有点急的，可以快的尽量快！

有很多错误啊

My favorite stars is Super Junior.I think they are so smart and lovely. I like action movie is named《Ye wen》and a comedy named 《Shi Quan Jiu Mei》.我觉得这样是对的。

My Hobbies I have many hobbies, such as sports, singing, playing the violin and keeping a diary. In school, I often hear the P.E. teacher say, sports do good to one's health, and will make one live longer. So, I like sports very much. I go running at five o'clock in the morning, and after classes in the afternoon. I play pingpong with my friends. These sports have kept me healthy. At home, I like to sing and play the violin. I hope I will be a singer and a violinist① when I grow up. In order to attain these goals②,I go to the teacher's home for a lesson every Saturday, and practise singing and playing the violin every day. Busy as I am, I am quite happy. Of all my hobbies I like reading books best. In my bedroom there are nearly six hundred books. There are story books, textbooks, magazines, and others. When I grow up, I will serve the people with the knowledge I have learned from them My hobby My hobby is lisetening to music. I like listening to music best.Because listening to music makes me relaxed.When I am tired,I will listening some quiet music,that makes me fall asleep very quickly.My favorite music is the music that has good lyrics.Good lyrics can also make me learn Chinese or English well I love listening to music.I will keep this hobby forever. my hobby Hobbies can make someone happy ,so I like them .And I have many hobbies.Do you agree with me? I like sports very much.But basketball is my favorite sport.I often play basketball with my friends on the schoole piayground on my free time.Play basketball help to build me up,so I am very healthy now.Now basketball is becoming more and more popular all over the world.I like baketball. Everybody should have a hobby,only because a hobby can help you feel happy and make your life rich.My hobby is to play football with my classmates after school.I enjoy playing it and watching it.Playing football makes me very strong.We have a football team of our class. And we usually have a football game with the students from the other class.It is a good time for us.We don't care who wins the game,we just want to have a good time together.Then,you can also make lots of friends with your football games.I think most of the boys like football best.Anyway,football is a great sport.I like it very much.