假设你是张明，即将初中毕业。你的美国好友Jack发来e-mail询问你的暑假计划。请你给他回复一封e-mail，告

假设你是张明，即将初中毕业。你的美国好友Jack发来e-mail询问你的暑假计划。请你给他回复一封e-mail，告

Hi, Jack, the summer vacation is coming soon .I want to have a relaxing summer vacation. I feel tired this term so I want to relax myself. First, I will visit Beijing with my parents. We will go there by train .Second， I want to read some English books. Our teacher tells us about some famous English books. I want to read them .Third, I am going to be a volunteer .I want to do things for others .Fourth, I will also stay at home to help mother do some housework, and do some sports.  How will you spend your holiday? Best wishes! Yours, Zhang Ming

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