托福作文.In this set of materials ,the reading passage lists man

托福作文.
In this set of materials ,the reading passage lists many useages of garlic from ancient socity to temperory socity,and the information in the listening passage support the reading passage by telling us that some scientists found that garlic did kill bateria.
The reading passage tells that garlic has been used since 3000 BC .Ancient Egypt used it to cure 22 ailment and to feed the slaves .What's more ,Greek and Roman believed that garlic could ward off evil spells and curses.Sometimes they fed on soliders with garlic for they believed that garlic encouraged the soliders.Additionally,home used it as odysseys and the Vikings used it to increased the endurance during voyages .
The listening material tells some more scientific information to support the reading material .It indicates that some scientists found that garlic could kill bateria during World War 1 and uncooked garlic could kill 23 bateria.
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In this set of materials,the reading passage lists many usages of garlic from the ancient society until now,and the information in the listening passage supported the reading passage by telling us that scientists have found that garlic does kill bacteria.
The reading passage also explained that garlic has been in used since 3000 BC.Ancient Egyptians used it to cure 22 ailments and to feed the slaves .What's more,Greeks and Romans believed that garlic could ward off evil spells and curses.Sometimes they fed it to the soldiers with garlic for they believed that garlic encourages the soldiers.Additionally,Home used it as odysseys and the Vikings used it to increase the endurance of the crew during voyages.In the listening passage,garlic was used to kill bateria in WWI.
Home used it as odysseys and 这句需要更正,所有“ ”代表已经更正的地方