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My name is Peter. I come from the U.S.A. I am twelve years old . I'm a student in Grade Seven. I have a happy family.We live in Beijing now.
Myfather is a doctor.He works in a hospital.My mother is a teacher.She teachers in a high school.My little sister.Rose.is only four years old.She is very cute.My grandparents live with us and look after Rose at home.
His name is Peter. He comes from the U.S.A. He is twelve years old , He's a student in Grade Seven. He has a happy family. They are living in Beijing now.
His father is a doctor . He works in a hospital. His mother is a teacher.She teachers in a high school.His little sister Rose is only four years old.She is very cute.His grandparents live with them and look after Rose at home.
His name is Peter ,He comes from the U.S.A.He is twelve years old.He is a student in Grade Seven.He has a happy family.They live in Beijing now.
His father is a doctor.He works in a hospital.His mother is a teacher.she teaches in a high school .His little sister .Rose ,is only four years old .She is very cute,His grandparents live with them and look after Rose at home.
His name is Peter who comes from the U.S.A.He is twelve years old.He is a student in Grade Seven. He has a happy family and lives in Beijing now.
His father is a doctor and works in a hospital.His mother is a teacher and teaches in a high school.His little sister.Rose.is only four years old.She is very cute.His grandparents lives with them and look after Rose at home.