2015年六级作文好奇心我只写了前面的激情没怎么提好奇，句子写的还可以有举例子，有少量语言错误，这

2015年六级作文好奇心我只写了前面的激情没怎么提好奇，句子写的还可以有举例子，有少量语言错误，这种情况能有多少分？能上60分吗？

I believe that curiosity is vitally important. The influence of being curious is significant.

First, curiosity can be a driving force to motivate us. For example, I can relate to my private experience. I’ve never lived abroad. I took conventional English education in junior high school and high school in Japan. I’m not in abundant English environment at workplace. But I’d like to know how high level such a person reaches at. It’s no exaggeration to say that this curiosity drives me to improve my English.

Second, curiosity can maintain patience. I believe that more or less we demand patience to master something or learn something. Curiosity plays an important role to maintain continuance. For example, I majored in Physics in my university days. It was so pain in the neck to learn esoteric equations such as Einstein equation, Maxwell equation, Schrodinger equation whatever. Those are all basic equations to describe physical phenomenon. It’s tough to understand them. But my curiosity to know the meanings of those equations kept my patience.

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