麻烦帮我简单的看一下这篇初二英语短文！急！明天要交了！

Mr brown.
I 'm sorry when I know your bag is brocken.I think you can find a place to fix your bag!Go straight ahead the sreet and stop in the thired crossing.Then turn left into Haihang Road.You can take No.9 bus and take off at Fuqian Road.Go across the square you can find Gao Dian on the right.It's between a resatuarent and a bank!

Mr brown.
I 'm sorry that I knew your bag is brocken.I think you can find a place to fix your bag!Go straight ahead the street and stop at the third crossing.Then turn left into Haihang Road.You can take No.9 bus and take off at Fuqian Road.Go across the square you can find Gao Dian on the right.It's between a restaurant and a bank!

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Mr Brown,

I'm sorry when I know your bag was broken .I think you can find a place to repair your bag!Go straight ahead the street and stop in the third crossing. Then turn left into Haihang Road , you can take No.9 bus and get off at Fuqian Road.Go across the square you can find Gao Dian on the right.It's between a restaurant and a bank!