港大的个人简历应该怎么写

港大的个人简历应该怎么写

有什么爱好、优点、特长及能力，对自己的未来有什么规划，告诉她考上香港大学是你实现人生目标的重要一步

personal statement i’m a student (space bar) who graduated from xxx school in xx. though it is (space bar) hard to fulfill, i have a dream of changing this ('this' would be better) world---the same as steven jobs’.to achieve my dream, it (would be) beneficial for me to exchange ideas with others (around the world with different cultures). but it seems that mainland universities pay more attention on passing knowledge than motivating student to develop their own (perspectives). (whereas), hku (encourages students from different continents to share their very own culture), (which) is a great place to broaden my horizons and to accumulate social experience(s). i have a great sense of arts (due to my studies in flute and drawing). furthermore, i do often come up with (outstanding ideas, which are brilliant yet practical). (to conclude), i found myself suitable for (the area of designing, and has decided to major in ba(as) area.) in the past three years, i have improved my abilities in multiple areas (insert your areas). i attended a competition in chemistry, and won the municipal prize two (after hard works). thanks to my senior high school, i have many opportunities to help organizing some activities. because of living in school with classmates inweekdays, i have to handle some basic problems (by) myself, which taught me how to live on my own. i’m no longer a simple boy after senior school life (chances only go to the ones that are well-prepared, and i am the prepared one that is waiting for my chance.) thank you! hope if that helps, some extra points will be good for the editing :))