麻烦帮我修改下看这篇作文有什么问题

（1）My father

My father is a tall man with a pair of glasses. Everyone says he is a kind-hearted man. He often helps somebody whom he doesn’t know at all. He has really done a lot for others. I dont like him to do , because I think it has taken him too much time. When I discourage him, he always says with a smile,The world needs warm hearts 我的父亲是一个带着眼镜的高大男子。大家都说他是一个善良的人。他经常帮助一些他完全不认识的陌生人。他确实为别人做了很多。我不喜欢他这样做，因为我认为那花了他太多的时间。当我劝阻他，他总是笑着说，世界需要温暖的心

I dont like his doing that,我不喜欢他那么做

总的来说，基本没有语法错误

help加动词原形， taken him 改take