my home 作文 100字左右 初一 水平

my home 作文 100字左右 初一 水平

I have a family.There are four members.They are my father,mother,sister and me.We are the happy family.And we have a warm house.Although the house is not very big.There are two badrooms ,a living room and a toilet.My father and mother both are wokers.They are busy making money.They are for us.My sister and me both are students.My sister is studing in high school.I is studing in the middle school.We study very hard.My sister has a lot of hobbies. Such as listening to music,reading books,runing,etc.I like reading books,too.But I like novel best.I love my family.

第一行：large后加逗号；fisrt写错了，应为first,这句话语法有错，可写为：i‘d like to talk about my livingroom. opening the door 第二行：very后应加形容词另，pliancy是柔顺的意思，此举可改为 is very soft and new 第四行，由于这个是真实条件句，可写为if i am tired or sick, i can sit in the sofa to have a rest 第五行： i think you may ask me the television's brand 第六行： there are some flowers on the ...... 第七行： there is a green carpet.... the carpet looks like 第八行：there are some green pieces of paper.... the blue paper and green carpet look like a picture. wharever第十行：去掉but(but 和although不能连用）最后一行：bless my classmates be happy everyday