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My winter holiday was very exciting. I went to Ha'erbin to spend my holiday with my cousin Peter.I didn't want to go out first because of it was very cold outside.

Then Peter invited me to skating. I was interesting . But it was my first time to skate because I had  many many falls and I was black  and blue all over .

However , Peter was a good teacher .

He never stopped teaching me and encouraging me .Finally Icould skate because his hard work ! We had a wonderful time .But the next day I got a bad cold because the cold weather.

My winter holiday was very exciting. I went to Ha'erbin to spend my holiday with my cousin Peter.I didn't want to go out first because it was very cold outside.

Then Peter invited me to go skating. I was interested. But it was my first time to skate because I had  so many falls and I was black  and blue all over .

However , Peter was a good teacher .

He never stopped teaching me and encouraging me .Finally Icould skate because of  his hard work ! We had a wonderful time .But the next day I got a bad cold because of the cold weather.

第二行的Of去掉 第三行的interesting改为interested 第六行在because后面加上of 最后一行也在because后面加上of

because of it was very cold outside中because of 去掉of

 skating应该skate原形

interesting应该为interested

because his hard work和because the cold weather.中应该在because后加上of

My winter holiday was very exciting. I went to Ha'erbin to spend my holiday with my cousin Peter.I didn't want to go out first because it was very cold outside.

Then Peter invited me to go skating. I was interested . But it was my first time to skate so I had  many many falls and I was black  and blue all over .

However , Peter was a good teacher .

He never stopped teaching me and encouraging me .Finally I could skate because of his hard work ! We had a wonderful time .But the next day I got a bad cold because of the cold weather.