句子改错1、As the development of the society ,more and people use

句子改错1、As the development of the society ,more and people use the computer in our daily life,
especially for the student and office assistant.2、We use computer for teaching ,learning ,working .Sometimes it could instead of TV and newspaper .3/Many people think of spending too much time using a computer isbad.4、although it is bad to our eyes,we can find many useful thing in it ,We also need free ,we can play some games on it .5/I think don't play it much time because your eyes will bad!6、we can use computers to do many things ,for example,play games,write letters study hard and so on

1 把and后面再加一个more；2 instead of改为take the place of； 3 is bad可改为is unuseful; 4 把thing改为things； 5 wil后面加上become；6 在study前面加上and.个人意见,仅供参考!