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The topic of my speech today is "one of the most impressive."Time flies, I have nearly is a sophomore students.Maybe I'll forget all of Junior high school life,but I can't forget a person, she's my teacher.She is very pretty. She has curly hair and a pair of big eyes.She gave lessons very patiently. She always has good ideas to make her students laugh, and we feel happy in her class. We learn very quickly in this way. Besides, she cares every students in her class. She knows our likes and dislikes, and then give us special attention according to our differences.she is very kind to us, too. She never scolds us. When we make mistakes in study, she will point out the mistake kindly and tell us how to correct it. When we make progress, she feels happy, too.

one of the most impressive,后面还少个名字，可加上person或teacher

其余错误主要是时态不对。

Time flying, I am a sophomore student. Maybe I'll forget the life in my junior high school ,but I'll never forget my teacher. She is very pretty. She has curly hair and a pair of big eyes.She gave lessons very patiently. She always has good ideas to make her students laugh, and we feel happy in her class. We learn very quickly in this way. Besides, she cares every students in her class. She knows our likes and dislikes, and then gave us special attention according to our differences.she is very kind to us, too. She never scolded us. When we made mistakes in study, she pointed out the mistake kindly and told us how to correct it. When we made progress, she felt happy, too.

The topic of my speech today is "one of the most impressive (person)."Time flies, I am a sophomore student. Maybe I'll forget all of Junior and high school life, but I will never forget a person, she's my teacher. She is very pretty. She has curly hair and a pair of big eyes. She gave lessons very patiently. She always had good ideas to make her students laugh, and we felt happy in her class. We learned very quickly in this way. Besides, she cared every student in her class. She knew our hobbies very well, and then gave us special attention according to our differences. she was very kind to us, too. She never scolded us. When we made mistakes in study, she always pointed out the mistakes kindly and told us how to correct them. When we made progress, she felt happy, too.

第一句引号里的不对，应该使用名词或者加一个名词，如impressive experience。第二句is改为been。第三句I'll应该是I have fregot。She's 改为who’s。pair在这里不恰当。下一句gave改为taught。has改为had。feel改为felt，learn改为learned，cares改为cared，knows改为knew，give改为gave，make改为made，will改为would，下一句make改为made，feels改为felt。

整片下来，错误主要集中在时态，应该加强时态的联系。