英语作文:请帮我修改一下,

首先,because不能用来开始一个句子
It is because a film usually (有些电影超长的 所以说usually,通常) for a couple hours,we can learn the original work in a much shorter time.Most of us would agree that watching films are more interesting than reading books.This is the main reaon why many people have chosen films instead of books.Furthermore,films are easier to be understood,they can be easily accepted by everyone.However,some people prefer books in the original because books tend to be more detailed than films.We can understand the book deeply,also to admire and learn from such beautiful literature.In my opinion,it is better to read the original work first,then to watch the film after; this way,we can have a deep impression on the original works.
如果有任何打错字 忽略吧 随手打的
再问： 如果是满分25分的话，我这篇文章大概能得多少分?
再答： 至少也20了吧……
不知道诶 我又不是老师
再问： 那您是?大学生?
再答： 我现在准备上高三
国外出生母语英语
再问： 哦，我也马上高三，加油吧！