高二英语改错1:In some parts of London, missing a bus means to wait

高二英语改错
1:In some parts of London, missing a bus means to wait for another hour.
2:—Why haven't you bought some butter?
—I meant, but I forget.
3:Looking at his exciting look, I knew he hadn't calmed himself down.
4：He requested that we must offer some money to him.
5:He searched for all his pockets but failed to find his pass.
6:—I hear John refused to tell the truth and was taken away by the polie.
— Where did you put that up?
7：She was broken down when she heared the news, but quickly recovered.
8:The earthquake was happened at night, causing thousands of people to be dead.
9:I have explained the question twice, however he is still quite puzzled.

1. to wait 改为 waiting
2 some 改为 any, 疑问句
3 exciting 改为 exciting
是他感到兴奋,才会有兴奋的表情
不是他的表情让人兴奋
4 去掉must, request已经是要求的意思了
5 去掉searched后面的for
searched for 是寻找的意思
这里是说他把钱包搜了一遍,不是找钱包
6 hear 改为 heard
你的polie是打错了吧? 应该是police
7 was broken down 改为 broke down
崩溃不用被动
8 was happened 改为 happened
发生不用被动
to be dead 改为 to die
9 标点符号有问题
要么,把however前面的逗号,改为句号,大写H,在However后加逗号
要么,把however前面的逗号改为分号,在however后加逗号
要么把however改为but