要点：1. .我家乡过去是一个安静的地方，四周青山环绕，空气新鲜 2. 最近，我家乡已经发生了很大的变化。高楼大厦随处可见。 3. 人们乘公交车去城市更快更容易。很多人买了私家车。

要点：1. .我家乡过去是一个安静的地方，四周青山环绕，空气新鲜
2. 最近，我家乡已经发生了很大的变化。高楼大厦随处可见。
3. 人们乘公交车去城市更快更容易。很多人买了私家车。
4. 但是，这些变化也给我们带来了许多麻烦，例如 ：……
5. 我希望我的家乡将来会变得越来越美丽。
注意：1.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题；
2.词数80个左右，第四要点须用1-2句话作适当发挥
The changes to my hometown





Last month I went to my hometown. It used to be a quiet small town. There were green hills around and there was fresh air. People went shopping by bike or on foot. It has changed a lot these years. There are many broad roads and tall buildings. Many people has bought cars and moved into the new flats. Many buses pass there. Many people go to the factory to work. The changes have brought many advantages, but they also cause lots of problems. The environment is not as good as before. The price of the house is too high, many people can't afford to buy the houses. I believe the government will take action to solve the problems. People will live a better life.

(答案→)Last month I went to my hometown. It used to be a quiet small town. There were green hills around and there was fresh air. People went shopping by bike or on foot. It has changed a lot these years. There are many broad roads and tall buildings. Many people has bought cars and moved into the new flats. Many buses pass there. Many people go to the factory to work. The changes have brought many advantages, but they also cause lots of problems. The environment is not as good as before. The price of the house is too high, many people can't afford to buy the houses. I believe the government will take action to solve the problems. People will live a better life. 解析：本文要求以the changes to my hometown为题，根据所给要点并围绕主题适当发挥写一篇英语作文，本题所给要点比较具体，在写作前我们可先将这些要点翻译为英语，再考虑使用适当的连接词将其连接成文。一定要注意句意连贯，符合逻辑。【亮点说明】本文语句表达准确，并围绕主题适当发挥，所给要点无一遗漏。短文中用了一些短语和句式如：It used to be a quiet small town；The changes have brought many advantages；many people can't afford to buy the houses.等。

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