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上海比我想象中的要大得多、在那里我看到了著名的东方明珠、也去了游乐场、看了演唱会、并且和朋友们玩的很开心、这是我过得最愉快的假期，如果下次有机会、我还会再来这儿

Shanghai was much larger than what I had imagined. There I saw the famous Oriental Pearl Tower. I also went to the amusement park and went to a concert. My friends and I had a very good time. That was the happiest holiday I have ever spent. If there is another chance, I will go there again.

Shanghai is much bigger than I thought. I saw the famous Oriental Pearl, went to the playground and enjoyed the concert, and also had fun with my friends. It was the most fantastic vocation I ever had. If it is possible, I will come here again.