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How can you be attractive to future employers and what does it take to land a dream job? Let us consider all steps of the job search, such as preparing a resume, writing a good cover letter, being successful at the interview, or writing a successful business plan if you decide to go into business for yourself.
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As entrepreneur.usually start business.they must have a business plan.it's very important for them.so what element should included in business plan? Financial features. Highlights the important financial points of the business including sales, profits, cash flows and return on investment.Current business position. Furnishes relevant information about the company, its legal form of operation, when it was formed, the principal owners and key personnel.in business plan you shoud understand what is you target.a good business plan can help improve Increase the probability of commercial success, but also can reduce the risk .so as a entrepreneur,you shoud Adequate consideration which is more positive business Plan
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如果没猜错的话, 估计你是在做类似于BEC中的DISCUSSION部分吧? 那要看你选择哪一项来展开你的DISCUSSION 陈述. 你给出的例子已经选择了writing a successful business plan if you decide to go into business for yourself, 那么你可以选择 all steps of the job search, 也可以选择这些steps中的其中一项. 例如, 我比较倾向于选择 being successful at the interview.
In my opinion, I will chooese being successful at the interview to attract my future employers. Indeed, a resume with beautiful cover and words has good appearance. However, to be an attractive candidate, the most important condition is your personal qualifications. Most employers will judge candidates' qualifications during their interviews. Therefore, having prepared and successful interview performance is crucial, and that will help you to have more opportunities to obtain the job. How to prepare a great and successful interview? Firstly, we should prepare self introduction, working or practice experience, and some other valuable experiences, then try to make all these statements in accordance with our resume. Secondly, dressing suitably. A proper and positive appearance could give employers a good impression. Finally, I recommand that we can search some information and background about companies which we are going to be interviewed, such as their products, business fields, development prospect. These information will help us to add value in our interview performance.
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How can you be attractive to future employers and what does it take to land a dream job?你怎么能吸引未来的雇主，它有什么需要的土地梦想的工作？ Let us consider all steps of the job search, such as preparing a resume, writing a good cover letter, being successful at the interview, or writing a successful business plan if you decide to go into business for yourself.让我们考虑的所有找工作的措施，例如准备简历，写一个好的求职信，在取得成功的面试，或写一个成功的商业计划，如果你决定开始经营自己。
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As entrepreneur.usually start business.they must have a business plan.it's very important for them.so what element should included in business plan?由于entrepreneur.usually开始business.they必须有一个业务plan.it氏非常them.so什么内容应该包括业务计划的一个重要？ Financial features.金融功能。 Highlights the important financial points of the business including sales, profits, cash flows and return on investment.Current business position.突出了包括销售，利润，现金流和企业的立场上investment.Current回报业务的重要金融问题。 Furnishes relevant information about the company, its legal form of operation, when it was formed, the principal owners and key personnel.in business plan you shoud understand what is you target.a good business plan can help improve Increase the probability of commercial success, but also can reduce the risk .so as a entrepreneur,you shoud Adequate consideration which is more positive business Plan外墙有关该公司的相关信息，其运作的法律形式，何时成立，主要业主和业务计划的关键personnel.in你了解什么是768,16你target.a良好的商业计划可以帮助改善提高企业成功的概率，而且还可以降低风险。所以，作为一个企业家，你考虑是适当768,16更积极的业务计 |