英文作文：题目是我们需要互相帮助

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We are all living under the same sky, dancing on the same land. Everything we use, we share. Every problem we face, we solve it together. No matter how tall is the mountain, when we climb it together, it will be under our feet. No matter how deep is the ocean, when we swim together, he can reach the bottom.
You and me, all of us are connected, everything we do, think and feel has an effect upon the whole. For example: today, over 26,500 children died around the world. The silent killers are poverty, hunger, easily preventable diseases and illnesses, and other related causes. If we work together, we can prevent this from happening.
One can't solve the problem, neither two can. For tens might be hard, for hundreds might be easy. Since we were born, there is a thread which connects all of us together. One goes down, everyone will be going down. If we give the one who goes down a little bit support, we will be all heading forward.
If the world is held by piece, then it is help by piece of love, piece of hope, piece of help, piece of smile from everyone of us. We are all part of the piece puzzle, one missing won't make the whole perfect.
As the song sang,"if we hold on together, our dream will never die", yes, if we hold on together, we can help out others promblems, we can dream the dream we never dreamed.
Let's go hand in hand to create a better world. Remember we all need your help.
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means of communication of college students nowadays, an increasing number of means of communication are available, especially to us college students, with the rapid development of science and technology. as can be seen in the chart, on the top of the three main means of communication is phone-call, which takes up something like 45%. e-mail is rated second, accounting for approximately 40%. at the bottom is, not surprisingly, letter-writing, which occupies a little higher than 15%. it is not strange that college students prefer to contact each other by phone-call, as it is rather fast, convenient, and above all, direct. hearing what your lover, your friend or your family say makes you feel intimacy and warmth. however, it is by far the most luxurious means of communication. when it comes to communicating with each other by e-mail, some students claim that it is also quite convenient and prompt. it may merely take a few seconds to reach your contact. but as far as intimacy is concerned, e-mail fails to fulfill this goal because a lot of e-mail is ccs. despite the fact that letter-writing, which is sometimes called “snail-mail” is a slow process, and that it usually takes at least several days to reach your contact, some students still think that this means should never be totally rejected. they hold that letters are something that is amiable, enjoyable and familiar. what’s more, letters are enduring which can be cherished for good and reread whenever you want to. for all the advantages of e-mail and phone-call, i still prefer letter-writing. maybe it is because i am rather conventional that i cling to this somewhat traditional way.