下面这段英文请大家帮我看看写的对不对,不对请指正,

下面这段英文请大家帮我看看写的对不对,不对请指正,
中文要表达的内容是“你休假回来了吗?希望听到你的声音,有件事情想拜托你,不知道是什么原因,我们的官方网站无法登陆了,导致公司的企业邮箱全部瘫痪,并且已经持续5天了,情况非常紧急,我联系了A公司,但是没有得到回复,
Are you back on holiday?I hope to hear from you information,now,there is something to trouble you,we don't know what reason that our Official website can't opend,and the company to enterprise email comprehensive paralyzed,and already continue five days.Situation is very urgent,I contact the A company but no reply.could please help us Coordinate to solve the problem?

Are you back on holiday? I am sorry to trouble you, but there is a problem that requires urgent attention and we need your help. It has been 5 days that we can not suffer our official Internet causing our e-mail stopping working. We contact the A company but no reply.Could you please help us to solve the problem?
原文语法有误,改后的内容把意思表达清楚了,希望能帮到忙.提议,最好最后一句交代清楚要对方帮什么忙,是帮处理电脑系统问题,还是联系A公司?
再问： 哦，我是希望对方可以联系A公司，帮助我们解决官方网站无法登陆的问题，谢谢你
再答： Could you please help to contact A company to solve the official Internet's barrier?
再问： 谢谢， 我还想写一句 “请他咨询航空公司如何转机” Please his consulting the airlines how to transfer ，这样对吗
再答： Please help us to consult the airlines about how to transfer for another flight.