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请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 You are discussing the following picture with your English friend J

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请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
参考词汇:松鼠squirrel;尾巴tailI think the picture is trying to remind us to be optimistic when facing a problem. As you can see, Jim, the squirrel is caught in the rain. Although it is raining heavily, he quite enjoys it, playing with rain with his hairy tail. There is something we can learn from the squirrel. Faced with a problem, we should be relaxed and positive. Sometimes we might not change a bad situation into a good one, but we can get fun out of something that seems bad and enjoy our life to the most.
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(答案→)I think the picture is trying to remind us to be optimistic when facing a problem. As you can see, Jim, the squirrel is caught in the rain. Although it is raining heavily, he quite enjoys it, playing with rain with his hairy tail. There is something we can learn from the squirrel. Faced with a problem, we should be relaxed and positive. Sometimes we might not change a bad situation into a good one, but we can get fun out of something that seems bad and enjoy our life to the most. 解析:这是一篇开放式作文,也是看图作文,认真读图,可知图画反映了人们对待困难的时候要保持乐观的态度,写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【亮点说明】这篇范文最大的特点是句式多变: I think the picture is trying to remind us to be optimistic when facing a problem. 这句话用了状语从句的省略,As you can see, Jim, the squirrel is caught in the rain.这句话用了非限制性定语从句, Although it is raining heavily, he quite enjoys it, playing with rain with his hairy tail. 这句话用了现在分词做状语, Faced with a problem, we should be relaxed and positive. 这句话用过去分词走状语,Sometimes we might not change a bad situation into a good one, but we can get fun out of something that seems bad and enjoy our life to the most.这句话用了定语从句。
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