Reading the novel,he returned it to the library and borrowed another one.这句哪里错了

Reading the novel,he returned it to the library and borrowed another one.这句哪里错了

Reading the novel,
改成：Having read the novel，表小说已看完，然后再还书和再借别的书。而reading the novel,仅作伴随状语，没有体现动作先后，意思是：读着这本书，他把这本书还给图书馆，又再借别的书，逻辑不通。