急！求一篇以friend为主旨的英语作文！

I have two new friends. They are Lucy、Pat. Lucy is a girl. She is twelve . She is short and slim . Pat is a boy. He is twelve too. He is tall and strong . We are all from China. They are good friends.

　Hello!My name is Xiao Kele.I'm from China.I'm 13 now.My birthday is December 25th.I'm not tall and not short.I have short hair.My eyes are big and black.I am very loveliness. 　

　　I'm a student of Songgang school.I'm in Class 7,Grade 7.Our school is very big and nice. Listen!The birds are singing in the trees. 　

　　My English name is Helen.I like English.Lin dan is my favourite badminton player.I like playing badminton,too.We have many theachers,I love them. 　　

　I have a good firend.She is Xiao Tangyuan.She is a Chinese girl .She is thirteen years old.Now she is in Songgang school.She is in Class 8,Gread 7.Her phone number is (0375)674-5418.Her English teacher is Mr.King.He is a good teacher.We are in the same school,but in the different classes. 　　　This is me!A happy girl!Do you want to make friends with me?My QQ number is *************************

修改一下，应该就可以用的了……