英语作文帮改语法错误Dear Mr.Smith,I’m Li Min.Due to rain,I have a cold

英语作文帮改语法错误
Dear Mr.Smith,
I'm Li Min.Due to rain,I have a cold and is sneezing and
coughing.Unfortunately,I have to go to hospitalchecking and injection.I 'm
begging you to approve one day leave for me tomorrow.Today's homework,I'll
send lisa give it to you at tomorrow morning.Tomorrow's homework ,I'll
let lisa told me after school ,I'll hand over to you personally at the
day after tomorrow morning.
Yours respectfully
Li Min
我再补一篇，请诸位点评一下。I'm sorry that I shall be unable to attend the English class this morning due to a bad headache.I beg to apply for three day's leave from 20th to 22th.As for the homework I missed,I will do my best to make up and hand them in by e-mail.Yours respectfully Li Min

我帮你修改一下你的作文,写在下面,你看看,这个比较简单,希望可以帮你.
Dear Mr.Smith,
I'm Li Min.Due to rain,I have a cold and is sneezing and coughing.
Unfortunately,I have to go to hospital to have a checkection and injection.
I 'm begging you to approve one day leave for me tomorrow.For today's
homework ,I'll send it to Lisa .She will give it to you at tomorrow morning For tomorrow's homework ,I'll let Lisa tell me after school ,I'll hand over to you personally at the day after tomorrow morning.
Yours respectfully
Li Min
最后你补的一篇基本没问题,但是请注意书信的格式,我写的这个应该格式很标准,左右对齐及署名等需要注意,应用文中格式也占一定的分数,现在记好了,对于你以后的考试等会有帮助.