英语语法错误检查I think many of us have our favorite stars.When we s

英语语法错误检查
I think many of us have our favorite stars.When we see them,some of us （may happy to crazy）.In the daily life of the stars,they always keen to go out with a pair of faddish sunglasses.We can see many stars （in the news of the outdoor photos）,whether （attend ）some formal activities or （go） for a walk,mostly is wearing sunglasses.（Like the famous singer Madonna always wears ）these big sunglasses which almost can obscure half of the face.
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When we see them, some of us （may be happy to crazy）.句子要有谓语
We can see many stars （in the news on the outdoor photos）, whether （attending）some formal activities or （going） for a walk, mostly is wearing sunglasses. 注意介词,动名词
（Like the famous singer Madonna, she always wears ）these big sunglasses which almost can obscure half of the face.
句子要有主语