一篇中考英语作文,给我打一下分数,同时,

一篇中考英语作文,给我打一下分数,同时,
I have many friend,among them,my best friend is my monitor,Tony.He is a hard-working student and one of the best students in our class.We are good at different subjects.So we talk over questions together.He is alway read to help others and try his best.With his help,I have much confidence to become better in many ways.He's my best friend.I want to keep the friendship forever.

I have many friends.among of them,my best friend is my monitor-tony.
he is an hard-working student,also he is one of the best students in our class.we are also good at different subjects on study.so sometimes we talk over the problems in our study.he is always try his best to help the classmates when they are in trouble. with his help,i have much confidence to become better in many ways.i can feel the honest between he and i . i wish the friendship will between he and i last forever.
其中楼主写的几句话感觉不是很对...所以用了自己的话来写了..
我们当时的英语作文是16分..感觉楼主如果没有什么拼写错误的话有14分可以拿