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Chinese students celebrate their biethdays in different ways, but the most common one is to hold a biethday party, at which friends get together to have fun,singing and dancing. On the biethday one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents. Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.

Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one's life,it can be done in more meaningful ways, for example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.

你好，我来回答一下。哈哈哈。to having fun,singing and dancing,有问题，show their love for their,把for 改成 to

in return 放在最好比较好一点。其他的没有问题了。

parents不应加 will

but是连词，前面不加逗号、common后面加、at which friends那儿有点问题，由于不晓得你要表达啥意思，没办法帮你改，show their love to their children，其他没啥了

biethday应为birthday, singing and dancing应为sing and dance前面有了to了就不用动名词了,On the biethday one usually receives应改成On their birthday,they can usually receive较好，因为你前后都用的是they， from friends and parents 应改为from their friends and parents,one of the important activities应改成 one of the most important activities 较好，it can be done 中done应改为held