英语改错 急急急

dear mary ,

i receive your e-mail just now . don not worry about me. i am getting on well with my research work in the lab.but to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. the reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests . i am afraid i couldn not agree with you . i know it is difficulty to learn English, but English is widely used in the word today. it will be important tool in our future work.Beside,it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. if you study hard you will be succeed .do remember that where there is a will there is a way. i am looking forward to hearing good news from you

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dear mary ,

i have received your e-mail just now . do not worry about me. i am getting on well with my research work in the lab.but to my great surprise you say you will give up learning English, with the reason that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests . i am afraid i couldn not agree with you . i know it is difficulty to learn English, but English is widely used in the world today. it will be an important tool in our future work.Beside,it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. if you study hard you will succeed .do remember that where there is a will there is a way. i am looking forward to hearing good news from you

Dear Mary,

I received your email just now. Do not worry about me. I am getting on well with my research work in teh lab. But to my great surprise, you say that you will give up learning English, the reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interest. I am afraid i could not agree with you. I know it is difficult to learn English but English is widely used in the world today. It will be an important tool in our future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I am looking forward to hearing good news from you.

dear mary ,

i received your e-mail just now . don not worry about me. i am getting on well with my research work in the lab.but to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learning English. the reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests . i am afraid that i couldn not agree with you . i know it is difficulty to learn English, but English is widely used in the word today. it will be an important tool in our future work.Besides , it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. if you study hard you will succeed .do remember that where there is a will , there is a way. i am looking forward hearing good news from you

加粗的为改过的

只有一处是错误的吗？The reason is和because重复了，把其中一个删掉即可！

dear mary ,

i received your e-mail just now . don not worry about me. i am getting on well with my researching work in the lab.but to my greatly surprise you said that you would give up learning English. the reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests . i am afraid i could not agree with you . i know it is difficult to learn English, but English is widely used in the world today. it will be important tool in our future work.Beside,it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. if you study hard and you will successd .do remember that where there is a will there is a way. i am looking forward to hearing good news from you

第一行：receive改成received, don not改成don't,

第二行：greatly改成great, learn改为learning, because改为that

第三行：interests改为interest,could改为can

第四行：difficulty改为difficult, important前面加an,

第五行：Beside改为Besides, will后的be去掉，或者第六行的succeed改为succeessful,