假设你是一个名叫李英的失学学生，因得到在上海工作的一位美国人Mr. Smith的赞助而重返校园，你想给他写

假设你是一个名叫李英的失学学生，因得到在上海工作的一位美国人Mr. Smith的赞助而重返校园，你想给他写

Dear Mr. Smith, I’m glad to have received your money and gifts. Now I can go to school again. I am very happy and thank you very much. I have been studying hard since I accepted your gifts. Thanks to the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made great progress in my studies. So our teachers praised me for it and my parents encouraged me. I have made up my mind to study harder than before to learn every subject well. I want to be a scientist in the future. I’m looking forward to seeing you, but I have no chance to go to Shanghai myself. I hope you can post me a photo of yours. Best wishes! Yours, Li Ying

试题分析：这是一封感谢信，要点都给出来了，审题时注意，要包含：钱和礼物已收到，非常感谢。自己一直努力学习。多亏老师和同学们的帮助，学习取得很大的进步。曾受到老师的表扬和父母的鼓励，决心继续努力，学好各门功课，将来当一个科学家。渴望见到Mr. Smith，但因为没有机会去上海，希望给她寄张照片。但不能逐字逐句的翻译，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。 点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，本文运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。