哪位英语高手帮我看看这个语句子语法错在哪了?3.There was some bad news th

哪位英语高手帮我看看这个语句子语法错在哪了?3.There was some bad news th

如果只针对语法,修改如下：There was some bad news that was seen by me last night.At the moment,the idea in my mnd was that I would like to become a superman and to kill the people that have an unimaginable and abnormal behavior.如果你用human是指人类,people是人们.behavior不用复数,他们可能有着同样的行为.被动语态用得太多了,读着有点累.修改如下,是否通顺一点?I saw some bad news last night.An idea went through my mind at that moment.I would like to be a superman to kill those people who have such unimaginable and abnormal behavior.======以下答案可供参考======供参考答案1:unimaginable and abnormal作为形容词，修饰behavior，应该放在behavior前面，而且不是 a behavior，这个词很少用复数，只有当表示学术研究的对象是才说“behaviors”。供参考答案2:前面的没问题，后面有问题，应该改成There was some bad news that was seen by me last night, at the moment, the idea in my mind was that I would like to become a superman and kill the people who have unimaginable and abnormal behaviors.wuold like to do something and do something ,后面不需要加 towho 来形容那些人的，应该是不可以用that的， 那些是什么样子的人呢，当然是形容词在前面啦，反常的，变态的行为，这里的这些行为应该是不同的多种多样的，behavior可以加S也可以不加。human复数是people供参考答案3:1) 基本没有错,除了 a behavoir 应该改成 behavoirs.2）但是你的句子特别的累赘，可以大大简化。把“短话”变成“长说”无论在哪个文化里都不是好的习惯。供参考答案4:When I saw those bad news last night, the idea in my mind was that I hope to become a superman and kill the people who behaviors abnormally.---------请采纳

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