英语作文Don`t cut in line

i've went though a special day.when i got home after school,i was told that my dad was in hospital for some serious disease.without hesitate,i hurried to the hospital.obviously,time is presing!so i just cut in line when waiting for the bus.because of it,i was blamed by others.and i realised that its bad-mannered to cut in line at any time.from then on ,i decided to call myself to order when doing every thing.
这篇怎么样?建议结合自己的情况修改下哦!：）
再问： 还有吗
再答： 要怎么样的呢？
再问： 自己写的
再答： 你提取下里边的词组句型，修改下就成了你自己写的了：）