检查语法错误First,在学校学习没有在家里学习效率高,并且处理好同学之间的关系是困难的.but it can deve

检查语法错误
First,在学校学习没有在家里学习效率高,并且处理好同学之间的关系是困难的.but it can develop your life skils .便于以后更好的融入社会.second ,I think school's food isn't health campared to ours home .I think my parent cook food better than school's food .
Third ,i think i can save too much time to go to school than at home .and I will be safe .above all ,我能更容易的去向老师寻求帮助.
中文有的不会,给变成英文=3=

第二点中有点混乱,同时“比较”的单词有误,“父母”应用复数（与Cook对应）second,I think school's food isn't healthy compared to that at home.I think the food my parents cook is better than that in school.
第三点“too……to”不如改为“save a lot of time to……”（“too……to是以至不能的意思”）
ps:I think 用的太多,可以用一下同义词组,如“in my opinion”等,还有…….
短文：first,it is more effective studying at home than in the school,moreover,dealing with relationship with classmates successfully can be somewhat hard ,but it can develop your life skils promoting a better integration into society. Second,I think school's food isn't healthy compared to that at home and the food my parents cook is more delicious.
Third ,as far as i am concerned,a lot of time will be saved when choose to be at home instead of going to the school as well as the scurity guarantees.你的意思有点混乱,不是很明白,就这样吧.