这篇英语小作文有没有错?

漏洞百出.
连单词都拼错.
second好吧?
不过想想小学生能写这样也还好啦,second后面的句子严重错误
首先,你不用加first second third ,这样就成中式英语了,不过好像中国介绍人时也不用第一,第二,第三的
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