My Chinese name GuoMingJin. My first name is Ming jin, my last nameis guo. I have an English name is David. I like sing, because I feel very good. My favorite sport is playing badminton. My classmates in junior middle school and get on very well, I very outgoing. I want to be happy of good every day.
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把你全文改正如下。具体错误不一一指出了。My Chinese name is GuoMingJin. My first name is Ming jin, my family name is Guo. My English name is David. I like singing, because I think music is very good for health. My favorite sport is playing badminton. I get on very well with my classmates in junior middle school . I am very outgoing. I want to be happy everyday.
My Chinese name is GuoMingjin.My first name is Guo,my last name is Mingjin.I have an English name called
David.I like singing,and I feel very good.My favourite sport is playing badminton.I get on well with my classmates in junior middle school.I'm very outgoing.I want to be happy every day.
My Chinese name GuoMingJin. My first name is Ming jin, my last name is guo. my English name is David. I like singing, because I feel very good. My favorite sport is playing badminton. My classmates are getting on with me very well in junior middle school , I am very outgoing. I want to be happy every good day.
My Chinese name is GuoMingJin. My name is Ming jin, my sur name is guo. I have an English name , it is David. I like singing, because it makes me feeling good. My favorite sport is playing badminton.I am in a junior middle school. My classmates and I are getting on very well with each other, I am very outgoing. I want to be happy every day.
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My Chinese name is GuoMingJin
I like singing
My classmates in junior middle school are get on very well witrh me
I am very outgoing最后一句不对...不知道什么意思要怎么该