帮我找出这篇文章的错误语法..并修改下吧谢谢Sand,sun,sea islands,those are the bea

帮我找出这篇文章的错误语法..并修改下吧谢谢Sand,sun,sea islands,those are the beauty of zhuhai.
Zhuhai as a special economic zone,economic is prosperity,it`s clean and tidy,every year there are many people come to zhuhai.
Macau,also caused the busy at Gongbei.
Qinglv Roud is the symbol of zhuhai ,it`s a long coastline,beautiful scenery,sandy beach,fish woman,park,everything is so wonderful.
In zhuhai,can enjoy life by many style,can feel the fun of life slowly.
NO matter what time,you can always find local recreation.
Whether Gongbei,Jida ,CuiWei,Shangchong,Xiangzhou,each area always lets a person feel different life.
Different people,according to their own different lifestyle choice of life,every place is the same.
I love the beautiful of Zhuhai,love it`s sweet,love all of it.

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【Beach】,【sunlight】,sea islands,【 these】 are the beauty of zhuhai.
Zhuhai ,as a special economic zone,【 is prosperous in economic.】 It's clean and tidy,【so 】every year there are many people [【coming to visit】 zhuhai.
【Macau,also caused the busy at Gongbei.无法修改.但是明显的是,时态错误】大致可以改为【Macau,also contributes to its prosperity at Gongbei.】
【Qinglv 打错了吗?没见过 Roud 】 is the symbol of zhuhai ,【which is】 a long coastline【with】beautiful scenery,sandy beach,【 fishing women】,【parks】.Everything is so wonderful.
In zhuhai,【visitors】can enjoy life 【of】many 【styles】【and feel 】the fun of life slowly.
NO matter what time 【you come】,you can always find local recreation.
Whether Gongbei,Jida ,CuiWei,Shangchong【or】Xiangzhou,each area always lets a person 【experience 】a different life.
Different people,according to their own different 【tastes】,【can enjoy the scenery in every place here.】.I love the【 beautiful sights 】of Zhuhai,love it`s【 sweetness】,love all of it.
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