英语短文,希望懂语法的帮忙修改一下

英语短文,希望懂语法的帮忙修改一下
My Favourites
Everyone likes people and things,such as singers,sportsmen,music,films and cartoon characters.So before we finish school,I will talk about my favourites.
On music,four my favourite singers are Jay Chou,Wayne Lin,Leehom Wang and Will Pan.They at the top of China pop music.They are all excellent,but they each have different style.And Qinghuaci is the top of China style music.
On sports,my favourite table tennis player is Ma Lin.He was first after he beat Wang Hao at Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.I like him because he plays wonderful.Table tennis,badminton and basketball are also my favourite sports.
On cartoon,many friends know my favourite cartoon character is Shinichi Kudo,his another name is Conan,he is a detective and he is clever.He finds out many different things.
Ok,we have only two months to prepare the test.So believe ourselves and we will win.
不是翻译，是错误的语法改正一下……

My Favourites
Eeryone have their own favourites.Such as singers, sportsmen, music, films and cartoon characters.
For my favourite singers On music are Jay Chou, Wayne Lin, Leehom Wang and Will Pan.Because they are all excellent and can stand at the top of China pop music.What is more ,they all present different styles of pop music.And Qinghuaci is the best of China style music.
My favourite sportsman on table tennis is Ma Lin.He became first after he defeated Wang Hao at Beijing 2008 Olympic Games. I like him because he plays wonderful. Badminton and basketball are also my favourite sports.
Many friends know my favourite cartoon character is Shinichi Kudo.He is a clever detective and also called Conan.He can find out many mysterious things.
最后一段貌似可以省掉吧,那个和前文的关系不是很大的感觉.句子语法还不错啦,如果能多转换一点句型就会增色很多,结构也会更紧凑的.加油～～!